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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Hi, Myeong Won –<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>I have the following comments on the attached documents:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>HA</span></b><b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:red'>n</span></b><b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>imDraftSummary120823.pdf:<o:p></o:p></span></b></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></b></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>In the list of items in the Scope add: “10) Provision for easier exchange of characters from design systems to H-Anim systems.” (This was one of the key requirements being worked on in Amendment 1.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>In the last sentence of section 2: For clarity, replace “WAM21” with “Working Draft Amendment 1”. Note that this is a Web3D document not yet submitted to SC24.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>In the last paragraph of 3.1: X3D should not be mentioned since the H-Anim specification is intended to be generally useful for systems other than 3D. I suggest replacing “an X3D interpolation component” with simply “interpolation”.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>In the first sentence of 3.3: Replace “are as follows” with “may include”. In this type of document, it is better to leave room for unanticipated new developments.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Replace the para following the list of 3.3 with: “In this draft, various methods of using motion captured data and keyframe animation are considered. In addition to the methods above, H-Anim motion data is also generated by converting the last geometric data obtained after applying the specified animation algorithms into the motion data format.”<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Throughout: In this type of document, one must avoid using 1<sup>st</sup> person pronouns such as “we” and “I”. This is especially necessary in the 2<sup>nd</sup> para following the list of 3.3 but also is prevalent in many of the subsequent paragraphs.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Section 4. While this schema expansion is important for the X3D XML encoding of the proposed functionality, it should probably not be mentioned in an NP for an abstract specification that is independent of X3D. I would suggest instead reworking this section to describe a test environment using X3D to validate the design of the extensions being proposed for ISO/IEC 19774. Then, use of the XML encoding is appropriate and some detail of the schema extensions can be described. You should also describe the mapping of the new and modified H-Anim nodes to their counterparts in X3D and VRML.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>In item 7 of the Annex, there appears to be a spurious “s” in the first sentence.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>In the portion describing the H-Anim motion viewer, either use .wrl and VRML or .x3d and X3D. It is not good to mix them. I suggest using X3D throughout. In addition, I would reword this text so that there is no implication that a separate motion capture file is necessary since such data could be included as motion capture data nodes instead which may or may not be in a separate file. In 19774, the motion data content should be described in the form of additional H-Anim nodes. If some product using the H-Anim standard wants to put these nodes in a separate file, all well and good but it is not a necessary requirement and therefore is not part of the H-Anim specification.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>NWIP Form</span></b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>The title should be “ISO/IEC 19774 Humanoid Animation)”. The expression “(revision)” could added after the title. Note the absence of the date from the title.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Please apply the comments above to the NWIP form. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>In the section “Supplementary information relating to the proposal”, the wrong box is checked. The box that should be checked is that of a revision of an existing ISO standard (ISO/IEC 19774).<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Otherwise, this document is well done :^)<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>I apologize for not getting to this sooner. I was ill returning from Brussels and am just now recovering. I look forward to seeing you in Seoul in January.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:22.8pt;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Wingdings'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>n<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Sincerely,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> Dick<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>/*****************************************<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>* Richard F. Puk, Ph.D.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>* President, Intelligraphics Incorporated<br>* 7644 Cortina Court<br>* Carlsbad, CA 92009<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>* Tel: 1-760-753-9027 E-Mail: <a href="mailto:puk@igraphics.com">puk@igraphics.com</a><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>\*****************************************<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> h-anim-bounces@web3d.org [mailto:h-anim-bounces@web3d.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>"Myeong Won Lee"<br><b>Sent:</b> Sunday, August 26, 2012 11:26 PM<br><b>To:</b> "William O Glascoe"<br><b>Cc:</b> h-anim@web3d.org; x3d-public@web3d.org<br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [h-anim] NP documents for H-Anim revision<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>Dear William,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>I have attaced the files again.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>In my computer, the files open without problem.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>It may have another problem that I don't know.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>Sorry for the inconvenience caused.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>Please let me know if you cannot open the attached PDF files again.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>Sincerely,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>Myeong<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>-- <br>Myeong Won Lee <br>College of IT, U. of Suwon <br>Hwaseong-si, Gyeonggi-do, 445-743 Korea <br>Tel) +82-31-220-2313, +82-10-8904-4634 <br>E-mail) <a href="mailto:mwlee@suwon.ac.kr">mwlee@suwon.ac.kr</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><blockquote style='border:none;border-left:solid black 1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 6.0pt;margin-left:0in;margin-right:0in'><div><p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:140%'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;line-height:140%;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>---- Original Message ----<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>From : </span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>William O Glascoe(<a href="mailto:wglascoe@csc.com">wglascoe@csc.com</a>)<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:140%'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;line-height:140%;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>To : </span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;line-height:140%;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>Myeong Won Lee(<a href="mailto:mwlee@suwon.ac.kr">mwlee@suwon.ac.kr</a>)<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:140%'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;line-height:140%;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>Cc : </span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;line-height:140%;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'><a href="mailto:h-anim@web3d.org">h-anim@web3d.org</a>; <a href="mailto:h-anim-bounces@web3d.org">h-anim-bounces@web3d.org</a>; <a href="mailto:x3d-public@web3d.org">x3d-public@web3d.org</a><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:140%'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;line-height:140%;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>Sent : </span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;line-height:140%;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>Monday, Aug 27, 2012 11:10 AM<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:140%'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;line-height:140%;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>Subject : </span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;line-height:140%;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'>Re: [h-anim] NP documents for H-Anim revision<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'>My Adobe Reader X raise an error telling me the files are damaged so it could not open them. Please double check the way you are saving them to ensure file integrity before resending the two files. </span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"250","serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></blockquote><p class=MsoNormal><img border=0 id="_x0000_i1025" src="http://mail.suwon.ac.kr/mail/rcptcheck.html/eVWZqUzNjY0/_9VHjkwMzQzMjA/u3cZ_DSWsDe0tiC7sjGZMhe3ObM/foo.gif"><o:p></o:p></p></div></body></html>